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Overpass | @purelyamuse


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Summary: "I think all the people I love will eventually leave me. Just disappear." "Maybe . . . I don't know . . . maybe we don't need lots of people. Maybe we just need one. And that's enough." BPOV.

I love Purelyamuse. She is without a doubt one on my favorite writers. Her stories never disappoint, even when she is making me cry. She writes truly beautiful angst. Not the kind that is over the top or ends with tragedy. 

Just a pure emotional believable story.

Overpass is such a story. 

A story that pokes at all sorts of emotions. For me, there was sadness, anger, trepidation, humor, and love. I wanted to junk punch Edward, punch Alice in the throat, and high five Bella. But mostly I wanted to take them in my arms and rock them both hoping they would figure it out. 

"Think of this moment, right now, as an overpass. That's our past all the way over there." He nods toward Alice's neighborhood. "And we're here now, on this bridge making decisions. But over there . . ." He points toward my home, his hand coming close to my body when he does, and I'm mesmerized by it. "That's our future. We just have to walk to it. Go from one side to the other. And I'm not saying it won't be scary or that we won't have problems, but I really want to get to the other side. I want to get there with you."  -  Edward  chap 14

How do you not love writing like that? I read that blurb over and over and it hurts my heart every time. It says so much all the while bringing the story full circle. 

And because I am in such awe when I come across such amazing stories, I always wonder how the writer even comes up with the idea in the first place. And because Purelyamuse is always so gracious to her fans and followers, she indulged my curiosity...

This started out as a plot bunny, but I'd been working on Never Said I Didn't and had another I was into and didn't think I could start another. But I wanted to. When that happens I seek contests because they limit me, which is nice! At that point I went to the Season of Our Discontent to find a pic prompt that would further inspire me. I chose the tire swing pic which features in the first chapter in a two sentence blip. You blink and it's gone.  

Anyway, the further I got into the story the more I realized there was no way this would  fit the word count, so I just kept writing. But I was stubborn and kept it in one file. Even sent the first half like that to my pre-readers. Ha! 

I got it written, sent it to my beta, who beat my butt for somethings--rightly so--which I fixed and now the story is much more solid. Hooray! 

Beyond that I did add a scene or two based on reader questions and desires, but I'm happy for those adds. More Carlisle. More Edward. No complaints. 

Definitely no complaints from me! 

And I am really looking forward to Never Said I Didn't when it starts posting. That will be a bit of time though Purelyamuse has said. At the moment she is in the midst of moving, we all know how insane that is, and she is also going back to school for her B.A majoring in creative writing. She is a busy girl but we will be here waiting for more.

Go read Overpass. You will love it!! Read the blurb, nothing more needs to be said.



Masen Rules & Masen Rules: The Beginning | @CaraWritesFic





I am hooked on a drabble and I am not a fan of the drabble, never have been. But every once in awhile one will come along that just grabs me and won't let go. *shakes fist at CaraNo* for making me bend my rules.

CaraNo is a well known fandom writer whose stories vary tremendously on the genre spectrum. From high angst to silly crack fics to explosive erotica. Not all her stories may be for you but I am pretty sure you will find one or two you really like and if that happens, your hooked.  

Masen Rules and Masen Rules: The Beginning, yep I am rec'ing them together because I am loving reading them together, both have actual story lines and characterizations which is something I normally find lacking in the drabble. Now technically they aren't drabbles, they are more a drabblish very short story with daily multiple updates. But that's neither here nor there, what's important is they are both very good and very addictive.

The summaries piqued my interest. She is very good at summaries...

Sometimes rules do more harm than good. Sometimes they're meant to be broken. Bella takes a risk and sets out to break the most important rule of them all. Well, it's the most important one to the Masens.
Our beginning was rocky as hell; we both screwed up a lot, but we came out strong—solid. The first year was the worst, yet I fell so hard for that girl. (Prequel to Masen Rules)

Short, to the point, the story line unfolding, the characterizations building, an immediate likable story. A very simplistic story.

Edward and Bella are married, very much in love, and have a daughter, baby girl as they call her. They both have troubled pasts including addiction but have come out of it better and stronger. This is where the simplicity ends.

In Masen Rules: The Beginning, we meet Edward who has walked away from his family and striking out on his own, working as an apprentice tattoo artist and very passionate about it. He definitely has his faults but you can see his characterization developing in the prequel as well as all the "Masen Rules" he lives by. He meets Bella by chance, definitely down on her luck, struggling, making bad decisions, but strong in her will to survive. There is an attraction, but a more realistic attraction. Masen Rules: The Beginning is only a few chapters in but you definitely get the feel for who these two are and what they straggle to overcome personally and together.

Masen Rules is also very simple in it's story line. Bella is now a nurse working in a nursing home. Edward owns a tattoo shop. They have a good life together but Bella wants Edward to have more, namely his father who he hasn't seen let alone spoken to in 10 years. And that's where the story takes off beautifully in it's presentation.

There is a wonderful supporting cast including "Uncle Cullen", Esme, Rosalie, Emmett, Alice, and Alec, all are OCC. You will definitely be amused and will love their characterizations.

Read them together for a full explanation in to the life of the Masen's. Both are equally addictive where you  will be greedy for more updates.

CaraNo is quite the talented story teller and writer. These are two stories you will want to read and you will really enjoy. For those who know her previous stories, you will love these new stories. And for those new to CaraNo's imaginative world, you won't be disappointed.


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Chop and Change by @KrazyK85_


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Summary: While trying to steal his car, runaway, Bella, meets Edward. A man with his own vices and rap sheet. Taking her under his wing, teaching her the way to truly boost cars, they embark on a journey of crime fitting of Bonnie and Clyde.

I love a bad boy story, especially a Darkward and Chopward is a bad bad boy. No pretending, he is a criminal and loves his life, he chose his life.

You are completely drawn in. You are mesmerized. You can't look away.

That is Chop and Change in a nutshell. You can not look away from the story.

Oh Chopward...tatted, pierced, smexy, rough, tough, and ruthless...

You know, the type of guy that we should run away from. But do you run? Absolutely you run, right in to the arm's of the bad boy.

And that's exactly what our Bella does upon their initial meeting. A meeting of Bella trying to steal Edward's car. She is completely drawn in as is Edward to her, though his initial instinct is to kill her for trying to steal his beloved Tanya.

Chapter after chapter is crazy action. These two together are explosive and extremely volatile. Love them even though what they are doing is so wrong, just can't help rooting for them. 

KrazyK85 is writing a fun over the top story that is packed full of explosive situations with a side of serious smexiness. These two are insatiable for each other and majorly possessive! 

A definite read with an amazing flow in the story line. Every chapter is a hit, no idea how she keeps it up but I am glad she does!

Here's an excerpt/teaser for the next upcoming chapter...

“Alice says their plane lands in thirty minutes,” Edward said, glancing away from his phone and over at me.
“Ten minutes is all we've got to get in and get out.”
Tick, tock, tick-fucking-tock.
“We’ll circle the block a few times,” Peter said, pulling over, “but if you’re not out by nine-thirty, Char and I are gone.”
“You do what you have to do, man,” Edward said, leaning forward and patting Peter on the back. “If we’re not out by then, go back to the hotel and wait a couple of hours, and if we don’t show, just destroy everything and head back to Phoenix.”
“Are you expecting that we’re going to get caught?” I asked.
“No,” he said, tucking the Colt into his belt, “but it’s smart to plan for failure.”
“What about Jasper and Emmett?” Charlotte’s soft and caring eyes were wide with concern.
“Can you text them for us? Just let them know that shit went astray and to get the fuck out of the country as soon as possible.”
“Of course,” Charlotte’s smile was warm, “we’re family.” She reached over the seat and grasped Edward’s hand, a soft stroke, and a gentle squeeze.
It was instant.
The strong and powerful ping of jealousy shot through me, pumping and pulsating in my veins. I felt it deep in my bones. A prickly and uncomfortable sensation on my skin, manifesting into this glaring hatred for this woman, who continued to touch what was mine, and I wanted her to stop.
Seconds ticked by slowly as I waited for Charlotte to remove her hand before I acted on my murderous thoughts.
“Um, thanks,” Edward said, breaking away from the hold she had on him and grabbed my wrists, pinning them down to my lap. I had no idea that I’d been reaching for my gun. “Let’s hope that it doesn't come to violence,” he said to her but was speaking to me.


See what I mean??? Bad bad bad...


You're My Ugly Imprint, Baby by @paintmeundone

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Summary: The ugly aftermath of imprinting. No more bruises, just bloody faces. I will love till the end of time. 

Authors Note:  Please read , Map me with Bruises, Baby , first. -  Sam left a hole in my heart, Jacob Black put a cable through it. To bad I just killed the woman he loved -Bella Swan. Jacob Black is my imprint. Yes, this is going to hurt to read, imprinting has never been so ugly.

I posted a rec 2 months ago for Map Me With Bruises. You definitely want to read the story or at least the rec to understand the darkness PMU is bringing to the table.

Story Link - Map Me With Bruises | Fandom Fanatic Rec

You're My Ugly Imprint, Baby is dark. PMU definitely has a flair for bringing the darkness to light, so to speak. This is a more realistic spin on imprinting and the deep connection the wolf pack has with one another. The movies do not show this, and that's a shame. You need to read the books in order to understand the many wonderful stories that are out there. The movies showed a wolf pack that was highly glossed over and not very accurate in the depiction of emotions that were going on within the pack. 

Sadly, so many of these wonderfully written stories get the bash and the authors attacked by reviewers based on their own lack of knowledge of the stories. I am amazed that there are more people in the fandom who have not read the books, and have only seen the movies. 

Whether you are a wolf girl or a vamp girl, You're My Ugly Imprint, Baby will tug at your emotions. If you are a fan of a darker truer  story, you will love it.



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Finding Sunshine by @anhanninen

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Summary: Surrounded by darkness after a vicious attack almost ended her life, Bella starts over, hoping to find the sunshine she so desperately misses. She finds it when she least expects in a young, carefree doctor. Life isn't a fairytale, though, and to get to where they belong, obstacles have to be climbed and fears have to be faced.

So I am having anhanninen withdrawal with a side of Little One sweats and shakes.

FFOF was just one of those stories you wanted to wrap yourself around and hug to pieces. It completed this week and I am missing Little One already. The updates were always a breath of light in between all the dark and angsty stories I usually read. 

So while I am waiting not so patiently for the sequel, yup, a sequel, I thought I would let you know about another really good story the author is writing, Finding Sunshine.

In this story, the theme is a bit dark. Bella has been through some serious trauma and is trying to rebuild her life day by day. Her chance meeting with Edward gives her hope at the normalcy she craves, but nothing is ever that simple.

anhanninen does a wonderful job touching on the dark background without the lurid details. Giving you just enough to understand Bella's trepidation all the while building some nice characterizations and a well thought out story line.

Give it a try. Only 7 chapters so far but I am certain there will be more to come.

Definitely an author to keep your eye on.


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And for all you Little One fans...A Few More F Words is the sequel to Fatherhood, Formula, and Other F Words which will premier November 3. 

Here is the excerpt we all were treated to at the end of the epilogue of FFOFW...

Little One and I got home just after six, and we found Bella in the kitchen, just finishing up. I set Sofia down on her feet and whispered in her ear, "Go surprise hug Mommy."

She tiptoed over and threw her arms around Bella's legs, yelling, "I got ya!"

Bella laughed and turned around to pick her up. "You did, sweet girl. You scared Mommy so good." She put her hand over her heart and sighed dramatically. "I'm not sure my heart will ever return to normal."

"Daddy!" Little One yelled needlessly. "I scawed Mommy sooo good!"

"I saw," I laughed, pressing my lips to Bella's.

"Yucky! Put me down."

She put Sofia down, and I pulled her against my chest, kissing her deeper as I caressed that spot behind her ear. We parted, smiling. "I missed you," I said.

"I missed you, too. Dinner is about done, so why don't you go make sure Sofia can get out of her leotard without maiming herself?"

"Good idea," I laughed. "I love you."

I softly kissed her once more. "I love you, too," she said.

Thankfully, Little One managed to put a t-shirt and shorts on all by herself. We washed our hands together, and she sang the song we had made up. Well, Bella had made up. I had no part in creating a song about washing away germs with the puffy, pink colored soap. But hey, if it got her to do it, I was game.

I carried my squealing child over my shoulder back downstairs for dinner, just in time for Bella to put the plates down. Of course Little One ate that shit up, making a mess of her face. Yeah, Bella's spaghetti was a favorite of mine and Sofia's, but at least I kept myself clean.

Finding Sunshine banner by JaimeArkin
A few More F Words banner by IllicitWriter

Death by Lust - A Twitter Vampire Story @MiamiTrue @Vampiric_Lust

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Summary: This story began as a Twitter challenge, @Vampiric Lust challenged @MiamiTrue to write a vampire story on our TL's. Each one takes a turn with no restrictions or limitations. The best part is we have no preconceived story line, we just write as we go.

I am back again with another amazing twitterese story by Miami True and her TL writing partner, Vampiric Lust. I have been watching these two on my TL weave this amazing story. Again, I am completely amazed how this is done with such clarity that it is truly a story with complete characterizations and amazing prose. 

Adding to the dimension is Vampiric Lust who I have recently started following. He brings a dark, sultry, and erotic feel to my TL with his story tweets. 

I am loving that they have decided to post the story so that you can read as a WIP. I have read all 22 chapters to date in one sitting and am chomping at the bit for more. It is an original story with original characters. A world of the mythical and supernatural. Power, strength, trepidation, want and lust all wrapped up in to a story line that has completely taken over my brain. 

It is a world I want to know more of. I need to know more of the ancients. 
The driving passions of the characters completely lure you in. 

It is a passion that envelops and surrounds you with a disarming quality that you don't even realize until you are completely emerged in it. 

The main characters,  Daemian PenDragon and Kiani are two very powerful and passionate vampires. 

Each with their own agenda. Two completely different agendas, revenge and lust. When these two finally come together it will be a volcano of epic proportions. But with they survive it? 

I am dying to find out!

Aside from the story line that I am over the top with, their writing is so passionate. Keep in mind they are writing in twitterese, yet you bubble at the emotions coming off the pages.

This is a story that has me super excited for more.

You need to check this out. I assure you, you will love it and be as hooked as I am.

 
Story Link 
MiamiTrueDaemian PenDragon
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No Questions Asked by @Darcystwilight

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Summary: AH, J/B established, future E/B. Edward is every woman's dream, and Bella's one free pass from her fiance, Jake, but when she is locked in a room with him at the swankiest club in town, what could possibly possess her to turn him down? And why does she dream of his sad, haunted eyes?


A fun new story with an underlying drama and twist from a new writer in the fandom. No Questions Asked is clearly the epitome of the fandom and I am enjoying every word. 

Darcystwilight is giving us a story we all know so well. 

Some more so than others.

Who hasn't dreamed and fantasized about a favorite movie star? Have a special folder for all the pics you love to look at. Followed their tweets. Seen every movie they have made. Stood in line for hours for even just a glimpse. Plastered posters on our walls, cell phones, and desktops.

This is the fandom after all and you know you have and still do. 

It's the stuff fantasies are made of. Our daydreams of that fantasy. Our own preconceived notions and opinions based on what is projected to us in the movies and interviews.

But what happens when that bubble is shattered? When you are actually exposed to the real person and the fantasy person doesn't exist and never has existed except in your own mind and heart?

You get a promising new story that will tug at your psyche.

Darcystwilight has written a story, though only 5 chapters in, giving us just that.

We have Bella, Jacob, and Edward, all with very interesting histories. And all very canon in spirit.

Bella and Jacob have been together since youth, engaged and living together. A life built together. Both have careers that they are enjoying, though Jacob more so than Bella. Bella wants what the heart wants, to be loved and valued as she does. You can see from the start that things are a miss between them. Not that they don't love each other, but more so a growing apart. There is an underlying trepidation in their relationship and really quite believable. It happens.

Then we have Edward. Big gorgeous movie star. And the focus of Bella's fantasies and dreams, in her mind of course. 

The unattainable dream. Or is it?

There is a chance meeting of the two set up by Jacob and what Bella always thought and believed of Edward is soon shattered. He is not who she thought he was and is left hurt and confused.

How true is that in the real world? Preconceived opinions will get you every time.

No Questions Asked has much promise. Giving us a very realistic story line encapsulating our dreams and fantasies and what happens when the fantasy is shattered. 

The story is quite believable. A definite flow from chapter to chapter as well as an understanding of all the character's feelings with a nod of your own head and whispered words, *I definitely get that*.

Definitely a story worth your time in checking out.

Now, Darcystwilight is very new to the fandom and this is her first story. And me being as nosy as I am, I like to know things. I always love knowing what brings someone to the fandom and where do their plot bunnies come from.

So I asked and she graciously responded....

What is it about the Twilight fandom that brought you here and gave you the boost to write?

Hmmm....Well, I have been a die hard Twilight fan ever since the books came out, and I have been reading fanfiction on and off for a few years. Most of it was canon type stuff, simply filling the void the end of the series had left. In no way would I say I was a FF addict. In fact, I still feel like a complete oddball and out of my element. A couple months ago I was scouring some message boards on Amazon, looking for good book recommendations, and fell into a broad dedicated to fanfiction. I was a quiet bystander, letting all the posts fill me in on all this fandom had to offer. That's when I really discovered there were books based on these characters that were utterly fantastic and original.

What was the inspiration for the story line?

The inspiration for the story comes from a couple different places. About a year ago, a friend of mine approached me and asked if I wanted to write a novel with her (non-Twilight related). I had never written creatively in my life. I honestly don't even remember taking a creative writing course in high school. We eagerly brainstormed an outline to the book, and then literally did nothing. We both have small children, and busy lives, so I figured that was that.  

Well, then as I said before, I discovered FF, and I left inspired. One day I just started writing, at first sticking to our original outline, and then merging it with the Twilight world I knew so well. My friend still helps a lot if I get stuck or I need a push here and there. I call her my creative contributor. Also, the Bella character is very similar to me in terms of personality. I have always been a huge pop-culture junkie.When I like a celebrity, I LOVE that celebrity. So, a lot of the things she does and says are things I think I might say if in the same situation.



Darcystwilight is a girl after my own heart. I love my stories and characters! I completely get where she is coming from and I know many of you will as well! This is the fandom.

Come check out this new writer, say hi on twitter and check out her story. It will definitely put a smile on your face.


Where you can Find Darcystwilight


FF Profile  Twitter  Facebook



Much kudos to forthelongestday as well for a banner that has hit it right out of the park with her interpretation of the story. I love graphics and when an artist visually brings a story to life, it makes me even more excited for the story.



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Forever Hold Your Peace by Jake's Girl of @JBNP


If anyone knows why this man and this woman should not be joined in holy matrimonylet them speak now, or forever hold their peace... forever hold your peace... for fuckingever...

Even an Edward lover can enjoy a wolf fic when written well regardless of the pairing.

Then again, a good story is a good story I always say and you shouldn't be afraid to give something different a try. 

Forever Hold Your Piece is just that kind of story.

The story starts out with Bella on her wedding day. And typical of the Bella-ism we always find, she is chewing her lip, nervous, and torn with who she wants to be with. We all know the story, Bella loving both Edward and Jacob.

Personally, I never went in for the triangle and can always appreciate a writer who can realistically untangle the web Twilight created for us.

Jake's Girl gives us the flip side of BD, of what could have happened if Jacob did follow through and reached for what he really wanted...Bella.

And though only three chapters long, the story is packed full of emotion starting with shock, confusion, hurt, and finally, understanding.

And no Edward bashing which is always a plus for me.

Jake's Girl weaves the story in a very believable manner where Edward knows deep down Bella belongs with Jacob and graciously steps aside. You have to read it to see how that happens but I can tell you this, it was masterful.

And there is a little added perk for the Non-Alice fans like me.

Jeepers she has ruined many a story for me. Jakes's Girl gives us a nice little jab at her and delivered wonderfully by Bella. Hallelujah!

Forever Hold Your Peace was a very likable little story.

If your a Jacob/Bella fan, you will absolutely love it.

And even if your an Edward lover, you will definitely have a smile on your face while reading.

You go Jake's Girl! Very well done!

Give the story a try, I am certain you will be pleased and start stalking around JBNP looking for some more stories that give a really nice balance for us all.

I do. ♥♥♥





You can find Jake's Girl on her JBNP profile


And stop by Jacob Black N Pack for more great stories and graphics!


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Love A Bad Boy? Let Me Introduce You To My Favorite Bad Boy...Darkward


So many stories, so many Edward's to choose from. I love them all. What can I say, I love Edward. But my favorite Edward is a dark and naughty Edward.

And the bad boy of them all...Darkward.

I love Darkward. He is without a doubt my favorite Edward.

There is something so alluring about the dangerous and dark side of this character. 

You are completely drawn in. Mesmerized. Can't look away. Heart hammering. Hair stands up on the back of your neck. Skin prickles. Breath quickens. Pulse racing. Palms sweating. Hands to throat trying to hold back the scream.

You know, the type of guy that we should run away from. But do you run? Absolutely you run, right in to the arm's of the bad boy. 

And why would you do that? Because you must.

Not really much of an answer is it? Then how about these...

Danger: The dangerous elements of a bad boy often make them irresistible to women who feel pressure to follow society’s rules. Bad boys lead us off on those dark roads that are unexplored giving us an excuse to throw caution to the wind.

Looks: A bad boy may be unconventionally beautiful. His inner spirit radiates, drawing women to him. He might often have long hair and be covered in tattoos and sometimes it may only be the dark look in his eyes that signals he is defying society’s norms.

Passion: Bad boys are deeply passionate. If they are quiet, every woman wants to be the one he confesses his true inner thoughts. They take what they want in life with a rough style all their own. The raw show of masculinity is an intoxicating aphrodisiac.

Power: A bad boy never relinquishes power in a relationship. He will tame the spoiled, the bored, the heartbreaker and bring them to a new level of awareness in life, then leave them. Although many will try to tame a bad boy, there will always be new depths of mystery to them that are inaccessible.

The exhilaration from being with a bad boy can be very freeing. They allow us to stretch our imaginations and let go of fear.

You are drawn in to their worlds without even thinking twice let alone the repercussions or consequences of your actions.

I will always be drawn to the bad boy in any story. And Darkward is no exception.

And if you can find well written Darkward stories, you will be a confirmed believer in the darkness and obsessively looking for more.

Keep in mind though these are not stories that update quickly, sometimes months go by. But it doesn't matter. They are so well written and alluring, you will wait for them.

And why? Because you must.

These are my three current Darkward stories that I absolutely love. As soon as any of them update, I am immediately on them.

We have Preyward, Ripperward, and the naughtiest of them all, Gingerward.

Definitely give them a look. If you love Darkward, you will love these three bad boys...

Prey For The Wicked by Aleeab4u
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6785758/1/Prey_for_the_Wicked
A vampire finds the true meaning of temptation, an innocent beauty with a siren's blood. Is she prey for the wicked or the answer to a prayer for salvation? When love knows no bounds and obsession has no reason, where do you draw the line? AU/EB Darkward

The Ripper by Heart of Darkness
Edward, a nomad vampire, alone for more than three centuries, comes upon his next prey in the form of talk back radio psychologist, Bella Swan.

En Pointe  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6307582/1/En_Pointe
En Pointe by GingerWombatkat
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6307582/1/En_Pointe
For Beyond the Pale: The treaty left Bella his slave, but serving a vampire who demands perfection is a challenge. BxE VERY DARKWARD, Mature content, read at your own risk.


The Perfect Trade by @Eternallyinlov1

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Summary: Bella's father is knee deep in debt and can't afford to pay. So, when James Cullen comes to deal out the punishment, Charlie decides to get rid of his debt by trading his daughter, Isabella, to the Cullen Mafia. Dark Themes, OOC

I first came across The Perfect Trade when @ToTheDreaming tweeted it one night. It is a Mobward story, something I normally do not go in for, but I figured let me take a look...

The Perfect Trade completely surprised me! I love being surprised!

"I...I traded you, Bells,"
I was quiet as I let what he had just told me sink in. He had traded me to pay off his debts. Is that what he's trying to tell me?
"Dad, that's not funny," I said, shaking his hands off my face. "What kind of sick joke is that?"
Dad looked down at his boots, "I'm so sorry, Bella."

What in the blazes!! You traded your daughter to pay off gambling debts?!? Oy!! This is something I have got to read just to see where the author is going with such a punch in the gut prologue.

And where is Eternallyinlove going? Down the path of a dirty, gritty, grab you by the throat good read!

"Tell me you forgive me,"
"Are you for real?" I asked.
"Please,"
"You gave me away like I was a piece of fucking bubblegum," I snapped. "No, I'm not going to forgive you."
"I know you hate me now but..."
"I'll hate you for the rest of my life," I said. "This isn't something that we can just move past."

And that is the basic start up jest of the story. Charlie trades Bella to pay off a gambling debt. Nice father of the year right? It gets better. Bella has to work in a strip club until the debt is paid off...or does she? It seems the head of the cartel is Edward but he is out of town at the moment so his crew is handling business, but not quite to his instructions. Hmmm...me thinks Edward will not be pleased when he finds out.

Bella is not your typical wilting violet and submissively accepting of her fate. She grew up hard and fast with a useless drug addicted mother and a father who was a dirty cop and obviously has no feelings for her. And even with the crappy cards she has been dealt, she is resolved to some how do better for herself. She is strong and level headed, but still a kid making kid mistakes and judgments. 

Edward is strong, tough, and fair. He knows who he is and enjoys his life with no regrets.

The supporting characters are surprising as well. I even like Tanya so far, time will tell, but so far not your typical classless trollop as she is normally portrayed.

The story is only 12 chapters in but you can get a real good feel for the story. It is definitely thought provoking and an attention grabber. I am liking it!

Give it a try and let me know. Eternallyinlove does have a way with words!


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In Love and War by @vRSoup


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6348113/1/In_Love_and_War 

SummaryHistory is what defines us, personal and otherwise. To conquer it, one must decide not what they love more, but what's more important, and where one stood—with ALL things considered—could make all the difference.

Suited up. Armor polished, gazing out at those who *gather pitchforks, saws, and flame throwers*

Yes, I have strayed from my beloved Edward. I have gone to all new heights of OCC. Rumors are true, I can not deny it. I have fallen for a Caius / Bella story. *gasps* A self proclaimed canon girl accepting Bella with someone other than Edward?

And with Caius? *breaths in paper bag*  How did this happen?

Well, you see, what had happened was...I stumbled across the gorgeous banner for In Love and War and was curious. I then started following the author, RaindropSoup and her stunning blog. And you know me, the stalking commenced.

I just needed to know things about the story that had me completely fascinated. RaindropSoup was kind enough to entertain my curiosity and was even willing to answer my questions about what led her to writing this brilliant story. Yes, the story line is brilliant.

In all seriousness, In Love and War is just one of those stories where the story line completely grabs you, regardless of the pairing. And though the pairing is completely surprising, it is the story on a whole that has me.

We begin one year after New Moon and Bella this time has emerged as a much stronger person and embraces her future. A definite departure from the typical New Moon stories. But fate has other plans for Bella and she is thrown back in to the world of the supernatural head first.

We have Victoria, Jacob and the wolf pack, the Volturi, and the spirit warrior, Taha Aki. The author also enlightens us on her take of the Quileute legend and it is completely original and excitingly fraught with realism.

The story jumps right in with Bella kidnapped by Victoria and Jacob trying to save her. We are then brought  in to the world of the Volturi and their higher purpose for Bella as well as why they are in Forks. I completely devoured chapters 1 and 2 with the surprising twists and turns as well as heart stopping excitement...

Oh, shit. I gaped at him and then phased back along with the others, except for Paul.

No one but the most trusted in the tribe knew the third wife's name. When Taha Aki left the tribe, he left that name to the tribe elders, along with specific instructions to use it as a safe word only. It was supposed to be used between the pack and someone we didn't really know. It was so we would know who we could trust. The name Akane was only said aloud during a couple ceremonies—not even uttered when the legends were told—and only the council elders were able to give it to someone to use.

We saw no need for it, really. But why give it to a bloodsucker?

The introduction of Caius was a complete surprise as well as his purpose. I was even more surprised at Caius' realization that Bella is his mate, something he never wanted. There is a deep feeling of sadness that comes from him and his initial refusal to believe what he feels and knows is true...

And as I gazed at her, I realized it was probably more than that. I felt the beginnings of a pull, and my priorities began to shift. That meant only one thing . . .

. . . mate.

I experienced immense jealousy while Jacob talked to her. I smashed my lips together and swallowed my growl when they uttered their affection towards one another.

Goddamn it, fate is a malicious and fickle whore, I thought. I. Do. NOT. Want. A. Fucking. Mate.

The first few chapters have some very dark content of abuse at the hands of Victoria and the atrocities Bella suffers. However, before you jump to any conclusions, RaindropSoup does a phenomenal job of alluding to the abuse without actually being graphic or even describing in any detail. But you definitely understand what Bella suffered. And you suffer with her. The writing of the darker chapters is heart felt and the emotions overwhelming. And as dark as they are, they are completely in proportion with the story line and add a necessary understanding to all the pieces of the story. And there are many. There is a cornucopia of characterizations and history going on, but again, written in way where you are not lost, the story completely flows.

The introduction of Taha Aki and the Volturi connection is a key point to the story. There is a lot of history there. I love it. Being brought in to their worlds with such a different understanding than you are used to is somewhat, dare I say, empathetic. You will view the Volturi in a completely different light. They are definitely not shiny and bright, not even close, but they are definitely different than what we are all used to reading about them.

And Bella. She goes through some serious trauma culminating in a turning. And she is not happy about it at all. She is down right pissed off! And it shows spectacularly in the writing...

Isabella's eyes snapped open.

She was off the bed in a second, immediately cloaking herself.

Before any of us could finish our gasps of surprise and awe, I was knocked back with so much force that she and I went through the door, into the hallway, before hitting the stone floor . . .

. . . and dropping four stories below.

Oh, fuck.

And let's not forget about the Cullens. They are a definitely part of the story. As is Edward. I am going to leave you with that, you'll have to read the story to see how they are involved. I know, evil of me.

In Love and War is well rounded and beautifully written. RaindropSoup pours her heart and soul in to every word, and it shows in her story line. A story line completely unique and filled to the brim with excitement, heart ache, despair, trauma, surprises, and dare I say it, love.

You will be hooked on the originality and the characterizations. A brilliant story. And....*whispering*... rooting for Caius...

And a special thanks to RaindropSoup for not doing the typical *bashing* of my beloved Edward as so many do in order to incorporate the OCC pairing. 

This is a writer who can definitely weave a story without the usual cliche.


This concludes Part 1 of my Caius Weekend. Make sure you pop in tomorrow for my one on one chat with RaindropSoup as she tells us how she came up with this amazing story line!



 Where you can find Raindrop Soup 

Writer - Blog / FFN / Twilighted /TwiWrite / Twitter
Beta - Project Team Beta
Creator/Designer - The LUV'NV
Author Interviews - For the Love of Non-Canon
WCs - Twific Central



Take What You Want by @Purelyamuse


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7716152/1/Take_What_You_Want

Summary: Based on January 2012 witfit prompts. Though Bella's known Edward for years, they've just started hanging out. His crass, smelly boy self is not appealing, but his looks and charm are. How will she deal with her feelings for the gross, flirty boy?

Dirtyflirtward has crept in to my heart. Pretty much the same way Masen did, slowly and permanently.

Purelyamuse has written two very different and completely diverse characters that grab at your heart and will not let go. And like Masen Days, Take What You Want is a story that will touch every emotion and hold you captive. That's not to say there wasn't hesitation on my part in approaching the story because it is a witfit. I dislike witfit's more than drabbles. I have absolutely no patience for them. But every once in a while, I am surprised.

A loved Masen Days. I still re-read it from time to time. I decided to trust Purelyamuse's story telling ability again. I am so glad I did, witfit or not.

Take What You Want is an amazingly funny and romantic story. This is an Edward like no other. Dirtyflirtward. I mean who writes an Edward like that? Edward is utterly perfect. Purelyamuse definitely had other ideas. Her Edward is crass, obnoxious, flirty, dirty, and smelly. Literally! And you will love him instantly.

The story starts out with Edward and Bella's first encounter in class. Yes, a high school fic, but not your typical high school setting. Bella has known Edward forever and does not like him. She finds him completely obnoxious and yes, stinky...

"Hey, sweet cheeks," Edward says, patting the seat across from him.
Oh, no. Not with the nicknames again. He's ridiculous; has a name for everyone. I seem to be the lucky one, though, because they just keep coming.
His grin is wide; auburn hair wild, and I want to hit him because I don't want him. I don't. Not at all. Not even a little bit.

Edward is just so...ew! As Bella bluntly puts it and her dislike for him shows...

The bell rings, and he gathers his stuff, leaving his paper behind. Like a fool I pick it up. And scan it. At the bottom in bold, capital letters is Bella Swan?.
I run into the hall, ready to throw it at him. He's just so . . . ew! As soon as I get there my temper flares up even more as he's chatting up some sophomore, his hand on her hip. She's giggling and fawning all over him. I storm over to him and push him into the locker.
"Hell, yes!" he shouts. "Now?"
"No, not now! Not ever!" I slam the paper into his chest and walk away, throwing open the heavy doors to the main walkway.
"I'll see you at Skateland!" he calls, laughter following. "Wear something sexy!"

But as the story unfolds, you see glimpses of their attraction. Edward is blatantly attracted to Bella and let's her know every day. Bella is hesitant and confused over her feelings for him. She doesn't like him. Does not find him attractive. Or does she?

I look up into his deep green eyes, and all I see is concern, maybe even love. "You tell me what you want. You want me to get rid of her right now, I will. In fact, consider it done. She's gone, out of the picture. All I want is you."
"This is such a mess," I say, wiping my eyes and looking away.
"It doesn't have to be. We can fix this. Together, we can. I know we can."
"How? Someone will get hurt. They haven't done anything wrong," I say, throwing my hand out dramatically toward the door.
"It doesn't matter. Sometimes we try to be with someone, and it just doesn't work. Some people don't mesh. We . . ." he says, thrusting a finger between the two us, "do. You know we do."
I nod and wipe my eyes again, catching more of my tears.

Take What You Want has me laughing and cheering for these two at every update. And the lovely Purelyamuse is updating every Tuesday and Thursday, which is fabulous because I can not get enough of these two.

I am in love with Dirtyflirtward!! You will be too!!

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@Purelyamuse

The Search by @AmbersPen


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7345952/1/The_Search

SummaryWhen Bella Swan flees to London to escape her painful and humiliating past she doesn't expect her charismatic new boss to be quite so interested in her secrets... AH. Britishward. Rated M for language and lemons.

New comer Amber1983 is writing a romantic story with drama sprinkled through out. Bella has a painful secret. Edward is British, love that. Definite chemistry between them. Lot's of characters weaved through the story line. A story you will want to read. And if you love reading angst like I do, The Search will give you room to breath and sooth your heart. A definite feel good story.

I am loving this story. But then again, I do love a British Edward. Just seems so right. 

Edward and Bella's dynamic, employer/employee is merely a back drop. Their relationship is so much push and pull that you are just devouring the chapters to see what happens next. Lot's of build up, which I like. They both have so much going on in their past and to ignore it and jump right in to "things" would water down the characterizations and leave no understanding for the readers why they are the way they are.

Amber1983, though new to the fandom, is doing a fantastic job of unwinding the characters and story line. The chapters flow very nicely and her writing makes you think more than a romance going on. And though a fun read, there are many nuances to her story as well as Britishisms that keep you on your toes.

The Search is a story you will want to read.


"Bella, I really need to apologise. About last night."
This would be so much easier if she would just look at me but her eyes are in her lap, her hands clasped.
I clear my throat and attempt to steady my heartbeat.
"I feel terrible. I obviously...misunderstood the situation." I notice her face twitch slightly and the slight blush begins high on her cheeks.
I continue. "I was pretty battered, but I know that is no excuse. It was inappropriate for me to touch you and I'm really sorry."


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The Vampire by @Dolly3078

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7667838/1/The_Vampire

Summary: Sequel to The Girl. The gates of Hell have opened. Edward's darkest fantasies play in his head as he is put to test. Will he prove worthy of his destiny?

*Contains spoilers if you have not read The Girl*

Once again Dolly3078 is back with the sequel to The Girl. And this time around, you are completely enveloped in the world of the mythical beings at every turn. Cloaked in darkness with subtle peeks of light, you are in complete amazement as you read with wide eyes. I thought The Girl was beautifully written with such an aura of mystery, I was completely stunned by The Vampire

Again, Dolly3078 jumps right in at the prologue which is not actually a prologue, but a dream...

He did not know why he sought to save this girl; maybe the dark eyes and the long brown hair that fell in waves to her waist were what caused him to pause; to feel something in even his heart of stone. The king looked at the girl curiously for a moment and then nodded.

"I like that plan. It is not quite so wasteful. She will be my pet!" And his words brought a roar of approval from the audience. The king took hold of the chain that the girl was attached to and dragged her back to his throne, where he had her sit in his lap. He tipped her head to one side and ran his lips along her throat, as she trembled and whimpered piteously.

The vampire felt a surge of relief but it was short lived when the king suddenly rose to his feet, lifting the girl with him and sank his teeth into her throat. She screamed as he drank and drank, until her cries faded, along with the sound of her heartbeat and the king cast her aside.

Once you step out of the cloud of the dream, the reality that these are Edward's dreams completely throws you off kilter. Confusion set in for me immediately. Definitely not what I was expecting, another mystery with twists and turns leaving you spinning. Edward is not himself, or at least not the Edward we met in The Girl. He is darker, more haunted. Though he completely loves Bella, we are positive of that fact, their love does not seem to help him out of the darkness this time. Again, never second guess a writer. I was sure with the defeat of the Volturi, all would be happy now...

Bella.

His angel; his love, without whom he knew he would have been lost long ago. Ironically, the distance he was keeping from her was not sparing her; he knew he was hurting her with his coldness, but he was afraid of what he might do to her if he got too close at the moment. 

If he maintained some distance, he might fight against the darkness and eventually find it in himself to be a proper partner to her; someone worthy of her love.

Bella, beside herself not knowing how to help Edward when all he seems to do is try and push her away, makes an error in judgement walking out of the house and in to the yard by herself. Danger lurks at every turn...

"Come on, little girl, open your eyes for me. Open your eyes." The voice was deceptively gentle in her ear and as her eyes flickered open the first thing that hit her was the pain in the back of her head. With a groan she went to bring a hand to the source of the pain, but found that her arms were already raised above her head. 

She was shackled and chained to a hook that was placed above her. Looking around the room, slowly her captor came into focus. His blond hair was tied at his nape with a black ribbon and he wore a white shirt with black jeans. 

His eyes were the deepest red she had ever seen and she realised that that meant he must have just fed... on human blood.

The amount of mystery and intrigue is phenomenal but not overwhelming. Every piece of the puzzle makes perfect sense as you move from chapter to chapter. We learn much in The Vampire. More of who Bella is and her abilities. Edward and Bella's destiny. The road to Volterra to be taken to fulfill that destiny. The love they have is overwhelming and beautifully written. Your own heart just bursts with the agony they suffer because of that love. A love like no other.

I honestly did not think any sequel to The Girl was necessary as the story was written so completely. But Dolly3078 completely takes you by surprise as she slowly unwraps more of the mystery along with the mythical qualities that completely encompass her story.

I loved The Girl and am definitely loving The Vampire. A definite must read if you love mystery, suspense, and completely original story lines. 

*I do recommend reading The Girl first. Dolly3078's writing is masterfully filled with many nuances.You will need as much background as you can get to understand what is going on.

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Review of The Girl

* Dolly3078 published her first original work of fiction titled, "Light in the Dark". This is Dolly's fictional take on the story of Hades and Persephone. I am reading it is as well, and it is awesome! And I never use that word!! The realistic and human qualities she brings to the Greek myths is just, well, awesome! It is a great read and you can find it here on Goodreads with my review as well as where to buy.

Congrats chick on your much deserved success!!

The Single Game by @Awesomesauce416


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7628327/1/The_Single_Game

Summary: New girl Bella Swan is finally ready to start dating again, but the only boy she's interested in is too shy to even talk to her. Why are her friends convinced that the answer to her problem is some crazy party game… with kissing? 

I love Awesomesauce76! Who doesn't? She is really one of the most consistent storytellers I have ever come across. Her previous stories, Blood and Lust and Last Tango In Forks, definite favorites of mine.

The Single Game is a completely different venture. Awesomesauce76 has ventured in to the world of the drabble or drabblish story as well as a high school genre. At first I thought, what! no lemons?? She writes the most fabulous lemons. But, as consistent as she is, of course I was going to check it out. And I am so glad I did!

Though drabblish, you get enough of a chapter to keep you going without feeling shorted. All the uncertainty and awkwardness of high school is there as well as a shy and timid Edward. Love that! Bella is more the confidant one in this story, but not for long once Edward starts coming out of his shell.

Such a fun story that will make you smile every chapter! Thanks Awesomesauce76 for the plot bunny that just wouldn't go away!

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"Hey… are you okay?" a soft, gentle voice asked beside me. "You seem a little upset."
"Huh?" I looked over at the concerned boy sitting next to me, blinking at me behind a pair of black-framed glasses. I think it was the most words I'd ever heard him put together at one time. "Sorry, Edward. Don't mind me today. I'm just a little preoccupied, I guess."
"Okay," he whispered, more to himself than me.
So, where was I? Oh yeah… how would I know when I had found him?
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Burn by @VivCoLH


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7592567/1/Burn 

Ever have that guy friend that you wanted more from? The one that was there for you, held your hand and told you that he loved you. One day lines get crossed and there's no turning back. But what happens with that special guy friend can't make up his mind and someone else comes along? Which path do you follow? 

Have you ever started a story where the central character annoys you? Where your just shaking your head wondering what in the world they are doing? Why they are making such bad judgement calls? Frustrating to the point where you want to flounce but don't because your curiosity gets the best of you?

Burn is that story for me and Lonely Housewife Confessions is weaving a tale that is making me crazy!

This is the story of Bella who loves the unavailable married Jasper, who by the way, is not a nice guy, and Edward, who is a nice guy and very available. Bella hangs on to the hope that Jasper will be with her one day even though he clearly gives her all the signs that it will never happen. Stringing her along selfishly. Bella continuously makes bad choices because the heart just wants what the heart wants. She meets Edward who is all kinds of perfect for her but frustrating us with her inability to decide who and what she wants.

Burn will frustrate and make you buggy at every turn to the point you just want to reach out and shake some sense in to her! The story is so well written that even though you are annoyed while reading, you stick with it. The writer gives you just enough hope that Bella will finally open her eyes that you just have to be there to see it.

Burn is Lonely Housewife Confessions first WIP posted having recently completed the Twilight 25. Normally I do not do double rec's on the same post but Rise Of The Phoenix developed out of a Twilight 25 prompt and is worth mentioning and definitely the read.


Rise of The Phoenix
A new story/drabble that will start posting on January 1st!
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7699676/1/Rise_of_The_Phoenix

Edward comes to the US to attend Uni. He quickly figures out that being a barman isn't going to pay. What he does to ease the burden may not shock you, but his mum will definitely be upset. 

Rise Of The Phoenix is just about the funniest drabble I have ever followed. The story line, well, not one I have ever seen before. And as drabbles go, you get just enough from the writer to tie you over until the next day. Thank goodness for that because this story line is one that will have you laughing at every turn.

Edward is a poor college student struggling to make ends meet and takes you on a ride of what he is willing to do to make money. Definitely not something his mother will be happy with, but we will all love it!  

Lonely Housewife Confessions has me laughing at every update all the while wanting to give Edward a hug. Definitely one of the funniest drabbles I have come across. And Edward is British in this story so you get all those lovely "British-isms" as well!

* Rise Of The Phoenix is a continuation of Chapter 3 Prompt 8 from the Twilight 25.

For more stories from Lonely Housewife Confessions, check out her FF profile and you can also follow her on Twitter @VivCoLH.

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