Friday, August 24, 2012


Summary: Priest in training is placed at an all boys Catholic school. His reasoning for becoming a priest was to hope God would help him overcome his "urges".

Forgive Me Father was written as an entry for the Twilight Kink Fest. Now, because I am a wuss at heart, these stories are not my cup of tea, but when I saw FMF come over my TL and rec'd by KellanCougar, who I adore, I figured let me take a peek.

FMF is so beautifully written. Even with the religious theme, which I was very wary about, everything blended so well to make a wonderfully thought out story line. And that was the appeal. A wonderful story line from start to finish. 

You could feel the suffering, confusion, want, lust, and guilt in Carlisle's heart. His feelings were so well written that I was completely drawn in. 

Edward's quiet yet persistent pursuit was very well balanced with Carlisle's doubts and fear. 

The pure intimacy of their coming together was beautiful. 

And that's what I love in any story where there is a complete and overwhelming yet hesitant love. A forbidden love. A love that can not be denied.

avioleta completely encompassed me with her words.  

Amazing story, so powerful.


FF Profile  Live Journal  Twitter

avioleta is also one of the host's of Slash/Backslash - 4.0 
If you love slash, you will love this contest!

{ 1 comments... read them below or add one }

  1. Read it, loved it. Very emotional, she knows how to connect with her audience through her characters in such a surreal way. Wonderful story to recommend.